We like how you switched it up and made it a youtube video. You also had a really good speaking voice. Instead of keeping one picture, maybe you could have used different pictures.
This is so good man. Love the style, love the content, love it all. Great work. The only thing I might change is the redundancy. You repeat yourself a little bit, but other than that, it's fantastic.
Wow, good job! Really well organized and it flows logically. It was thoughtful and thorough. I would just watch a couple things with your voice: you say um a bit, and your ending voice could be more...affirmative? You seem to end on a question. I don't know if whatever program you used allowed you to do this, but you might want to make multiple voice clips instead of a single one so that you can have more control over your voice/speed/intonation, etc.
We like how you switched it up and made it a youtube video. You also had a really good speaking voice. Instead of keeping one picture, maybe you could have used different pictures.
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This is so good man. Love the style, love the content, love it all. Great work. The only thing I might change is the redundancy. You repeat yourself a little bit, but other than that, it's fantastic.
ReplyDeleteWow, good job! Really well organized and it flows logically. It was thoughtful and thorough. I would just watch a couple things with your voice: you say um a bit, and your ending voice could be more...affirmative? You seem to end on a question. I don't know if whatever program you used allowed you to do this, but you might want to make multiple voice clips instead of a single one so that you can have more control over your voice/speed/intonation, etc.
ReplyDeleteI don't think it's repetitive...